The dialogue between the characters felt
trite and stiff. Conversations didn’t
flow naturally. The love story seemed
stilted. For example one page Grace says
to herself that she realizes she not only loves the children but also loves
Robert and wonders why she didn’t acknowledge this to herself early. A mere two pages later when Robert asks if he
may court her she stares at him blankly.
This time she says to herself that she must have given him the wrong
impression that she cared for him like “that”.
This makes no sense. Similar odd
or awkward situations and conversations are throughout the book that made the
characters not come alive for me. The
basis of the storyline was interesting but I just didn’t “feel the love” in
this romance.
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